The short chapters from Julia Cameron's The Right to Write felt like the crisp, refreshing breeze that often marks the arrival of fall. Personally, I find the trade-off of humidity and heat for the rustling of leaves at my feet innately calming, and reading writing like Cameron's often evokes in me that same sense of comfort. Perhaps I should know how to properly classify this sort of writing- richly descriptive yet instructional- but I am not sure I can. I dare say it felt almost meditative.
I distinctly remember this same reaction to writing during my first year at Rhode Island College. My first year writing professor assigned us some short, yet absolutely beautiful essays that left me feeling shocked. I had never confronted this kind of writing- these essays were argumentative but had the descriptive languages and imagery of a novel. These writers engaged not just my mind but my senses and their arguments felt much more robust for it. I think this is something Cameron addresses when, in chapter one, she writes "hitting a creative bull's eye, a sentence that precisely expresses what you see shimmering on the horizon- those sentences are worth the chase". When I read or write a sentence that feels as if it fits Cameron's description it is as if someone is saying, "I see and feel your humanity. Me too!"
Is this just me? Do you ever encounter writing that articulates something you could not find the words for yourself, and, in doing so, seems to evoke a sense of community/ connection?
With Cameron in mind, I moved on to the NCTE Article. This article inspired me and simultaneously stressed me out.
In the interest of keeping things positive, I want to first acknowledge how much I appreciated the section titled "Writing is embedded in complex social relationships and their appropriate languages."The article states, "the teaching of excellence in writing means adding language to what already exists, not subtracting." I really love this idea, and I think it can be related back to my earlier discussion of Cameron and writing as an invitation into community. Of course, I was speaking personally when I referred to Cameron's writing as "meditative" and I am happy to acknowledge that this particular kind of writing speaks to me but may not speak to everyone. The point is that everyone should be granted an opportunity to feel that welcoming, that connection, that recognition of self within writing. Perhaps it is useful to refer back to our first class and the short discussion we had about the truth that is often folded into writing- every student should be given an opportunity to not only write their truth, but write and read in a language or style that feels authentic to them.
I personally feel that writing is an exercise in presenting the world through the filter of your own unique perspective. Then, is it a denial of authentic expression to continually ask students to write in traditional English with proper grammar and structuring? At this moment in my life, with my limited experience in a classroom, I say yes.
I don't believe the NCTE article would disagree with me, but sometimes I feel a small shudder of stress come over me when I think about propelling my beliefs into practice. Has anyone else experienced this?
Here is a short TED talk in regards to English, the language, and an interesting article about code-switching in schools. Not to put too much emphasis on either, simply food for thought-- particularly in regards to what is lost when correct/ perfect/ comfortable English is overemphasized.
Hi Maddie,
ReplyDeleteThe way you write is beautiful and inspirational. I could related to how you feel about NCTE article. It gives me a lot of stressful feeling and thinking, "Oh no, I need to be like this and that." It does not help me feel comfortable to teach the content to my students. If I try to teach with what I am feeling, I strongly suspect that the students will possibly pick up the feeling of stressed out about learning new things. They might will not write as well as I would like them to do. I agree with you that it is a battle between feeling free to write and teach versus having to write and teach.
Maddy, I love how you wrote about your experience with reading those essays in college. I hope that I can find and provide those kinds of readings for my students, and that it will help motivate and drive them to write things of their own. Those are always the best kinds of readings, and in turn, the best writings we produce.
ReplyDeleteI also LOVE that you mentioned reading something that explains exactly what you think/feel/want to say, but yet can't form into a legible thought. That happens to me quite often, and while sometimes they are through silly memes, I love seeing something that really just clicks with me. Some of my favorite books are about topics or characters that I RELATE to. That's something I feel that is extremely necessary in teaching. We need to relate ourselves to the work, ourselves to our students, and relate them to everything. Motivation comes from connection, or so I believe.
I really enjoyed your post, Maddy!
Hello Maddy! Let me start off by saying I thoroughly enjoyed reading your post! You are a fantastic writer and you articulate yourself really well throughout your post. I completely agree with you that when you come across writing that articulates something that you couldn't put into words yourself. It's that 'A-Ha' moment that FINALY you understand what you were trying to say! I also like how you mention that you feel that it is important to give students the opportunity to have an authentic experience with writing. Everyone experiences things differently and should have the opportunity to connect to writing in a way they feel best represents them. Fantastic job Maddy!
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